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Mankh's avatar

Poetically appreciated : ). Yeah, "stream-of-consciousness" was a mixed metaphor at the harbor : )

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Nowick Gray's avatar

Love the way the words flow just as the water laps and the leaves and wind blow! :)

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Sabrina Page's avatar

How wonderful and creative, with the film and the poem together. The poem is beautiful.

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Mankh's avatar

thx for appreciating the package deal : ), Sabrina!

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Peter d'Errico's avatar

Great poetry! I say poetry rather than poem to recognize the motion the motion visualized and spoken of and the effect of motion continuing after the poem itself. 🙏👍

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Mankh's avatar

Thanks for appreciating the layers, and ya, Peter, hence the phrase, poetry in motion : )

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