i looked at the photo for awhile before i started reading... haven't been to the shore for some time... used to be there frequently... anyway, i turned to your words and lo! .. they said exactly what i was remembering as i looked at the photo:
Thanks, Peter, and shows how some of what the waters/shore stirred in me is, naturally, of the waters. And your approach is 'funny' b/c at first i put the photo before the poem, but then decided to put it after, as wanted people to see what they see first from the words. You didn't follow the rules :) but it worked out fine.
well said...
and a fitting photo.
thx and photo from whence the poem first began to speak
Beautiful. Thank you, Mankh.
thx, Sabrina
i often walk along the shore
unable to recall when there was no war
Yeah, Robert, so-called progress has its issues.
beautiful and powerful...
i looked at the photo for awhile before i started reading... haven't been to the shore for some time... used to be there frequently... anyway, i turned to your words and lo! .. they said exactly what i was remembering as i looked at the photo:
"when the harbor waters
make that noise
flowing onto the pebbled sandy shore"
Thanks, Peter, and shows how some of what the waters/shore stirred in me is, naturally, of the waters. And your approach is 'funny' b/c at first i put the photo before the poem, but then decided to put it after, as wanted people to see what they see first from the words. You didn't follow the rules :) but it worked out fine.